IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.

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Đề bài

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

306 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that children should start learning a foreign language as soon as they begin school. I agree with this statement for several reasons, although there are some difficulties that schools need to consider.

Firstly, young children can learn languages more easily than adults. Their brains are very flexible, so they can copy sounds and remember new words quickly. Children who learn a language early often have better pronunciation, and they can speak more naturally, like native speakers. For example, many children in my country who started learning English in grade one can speak English very well, while many adults who start learning later find pronunciation very difficult.

Secondly, learning a foreign language early gives children more time to practise. Learning a language takes many years, so if children start when they are six years old, they will have a high level of the language by the time they finish school. This will help them to study at university, find a good job or travel to other countries in the future.

Thirdly, learning a foreign language helps children to develop in other ways. It can improve their memory and thinking skills, and it also helps them to learn about other cultures and become more open-minded. For example, when children learn English, they also learn about English songs, stories and festivals.

However, some people worry that learning a foreign language too early may confuse children or make it harder for them to learn their own language. Also, some schools do not have enough good language teachers. I think these problems can be solved if lessons are fun and not too difficult, and if schools train their teachers well.

In conclusion, I agree that children should begin learning a foreign language when they start school, because they learn quickly and it will help them in the future.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

318 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is sometimes argued that children should start learning a foreign language as soon as they begin school. I strongly agree with this view, as early language learning offers significant advantages, although it must be implemented carefully to be effective.

The most important reason is that young children are particularly good at acquiring languages. Their brains are highly adaptable, and they are able to imitate new sounds and intonation patterns with ease, which often allows them to develop more native-like pronunciation than people who begin learning as teenagers or adults. Young children are also generally less self-conscious than older learners, so they are more willing to speak without fear of making mistakes. In my country, students who began English in the first year of primary school often speak more fluently and confidently than those who started at secondary school.

Secondly, starting early gives learners more time to reach a high level of proficiency. Mastering a foreign language requires years of consistent exposure and practice. Children who start at six will have studied the language for over a decade by the time they finish school, putting them in a strong position to pursue higher education abroad, access international resources or work for multinational companies.

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