IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not

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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not
the best method of assessing educational achievement.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

269 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In many schools and universities, students' achievement is assessed mainly by written examinations. However, many people believe that formal "pen and paper" exams are not the best way to assess students. In this essay, I will discuss this view and give my opinion.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why written exams are not the best method. Firstly, exams often test only memory. Students learn many facts by heart before the exam, but they forget them soon after. Exams do not show whether students can use their knowledge in real situations. Secondly, exams can make students very stressed. Some good students may get low marks because they feel nervous or are ill on the exam day. Thirdly, written exams cannot test some important skills, such as speaking, teamwork, creativity and practical skills.

On the other hand, written exams also have some advantages. They are fair, because all students answer the same questions in the same time and under the same conditions. It is also difficult for students to cheat in an exam room. In addition, exams are cheap and easy to organise for a large number of students.

In my opinion, written exams are useful, but they should not be the only way to assess students. Teachers should also use other methods, such as projects, presentations, coursework and practical tests. In this way, students can show different skills, and teachers can assess them more fairly.

In conclusion, although written exams are fair and easy to organise, I agree that they are not the best way to assess educational achievement, and they should be combined with other methods.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

284 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Traditional written examinations remain the main method of assessing students in many education systems, yet many people argue that they are not the most effective way to measure educational achievement. In my view, while exams have certain strengths, they should be combined with other forms of assessment.

Critics of written exams raise several valid points. Firstly, exams often reward the ability to memorise and reproduce information under time pressure, rather than deeper understanding or the ability to apply knowledge. Many students forget much of what they have learned soon after the exam. Secondly, a student's performance on a single day may not reflect their true ability; anxiety, illness or personal problems can significantly affect results. Thirdly, written exams cannot effectively measure many skills that are important in modern life and work, such as communication, collaboration, creativity and practical problem-solving.

On the other hand, written exams have clear advantages. They provide a standardised and objective way of comparing large numbers of students, as everyone answers the same questions under the same conditions. They are also relatively difficult to cheat in, compared with coursework that can be completed at home with help from others, and they are cost-effective to administer.

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