IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world.

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Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world.
The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

310 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Learning a foreign language helps people to understand how people from other cultures think and see the world. Some people believe that foreign language teaching should be compulsory in all primary schools. I agree with this view, although there are some difficulties that need to be solved.

Firstly, learning a foreign language helps children to understand other cultures. When children learn a language, they also learn about the songs, stories, festivals and customs of the people who speak it. For example, when Vietnamese children learn English, they also learn about Christmas, Halloween and other traditions. This helps them to become more open-minded and respect people who are different from them.

Secondly, primary school is the best time to start learning a language. Young children learn languages quickly and easily, and they can copy new sounds better than adults. If they start early, they can speak with better pronunciation and become more fluent. They also have more years to practise before they finish school.

Thirdly, foreign languages are very useful for the future. In today's world, many jobs require a foreign language, especially English. People who speak foreign languages can study abroad, work for international companies and travel more easily. If all primary schools teach foreign languages, every child will have this opportunity, not only children from rich families who can pay for private classes.

However, there are some problems. Some schools, especially in poor or rural areas, do not have enough qualified language teachers. Some people also worry that children may have too many subjects to study. Therefore, the government should train more teachers and make sure that language lessons are fun and not too difficult for young children.

In conclusion, I agree that foreign language teaching should be compulsory in all primary schools, because it helps children to understand other cultures and gives them more opportunities in the future.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

318 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often said that learning a foreign language provides insight into how people from other cultures think and view the world, and some argue that foreign language teaching should therefore be compulsory in all primary schools. I largely agree with this view, provided that schools are given the resources needed to teach languages effectively.

The first reason to support compulsory language teaching is its cultural value. Language and culture are closely linked: learning another language exposes children to different customs, values and ways of expressing ideas. For instance, children learning Japanese quickly discover the importance of politeness and social hierarchy built into the language itself. Such experiences encourage curiosity, tolerance and respect for people from other backgrounds, qualities that are increasingly important in multicultural societies and a globalised world.

Secondly, primary school is an ideal time to begin learning a language. Young children are able to imitate new sounds with ease and are generally less afraid of making mistakes than older learners, which helps them develop good pronunciation and confidence in speaking. Starting early also gives them many years of study, increasing the likelihood that they will reach a high level of proficiency.

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