IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills.

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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

305 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people say that school subjects are too academic and that it would be more useful for children to learn practical skills, such as managing a home, work skills and interpersonal skills. I partly agree with this opinion. I think practical skills should be taught at school, but academic subjects are still very important.

On the one hand, I agree that practical skills are very useful. Many young people finish school without knowing how to cook, manage money, pay bills or look after a home. When they start living alone, they find it very difficult. In addition, many students do not know how to write a CV, prepare for a job interview or behave in the workplace. Interpersonal skills, such as communication, teamwork and solving conflicts, are also very important for success in work and in life. For example, many employers say that young graduates have good academic knowledge but poor communication skills. If schools teach these skills, students will be better prepared for adult life.

On the other hand, academic subjects are also very important. Subjects such as mathematics, science, literature and history give students important knowledge and help them to think logically and critically. These subjects are also necessary for students who want to go to university and become doctors, engineers or scientists. In addition, some practical skills, such as cooking and home management, can be learned at home from parents.

In my opinion, schools should keep academic subjects, but they should also include some practical lessons. For example, schools could teach students how to manage money in mathematics lessons, or develop communication skills through group projects.

In conclusion, I partly agree that schools should teach more practical skills, but academic subjects should not be replaced. A balance between academic and practical subjects is the best way to prepare students for the future.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

314 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that school curricula are too academic and that children would benefit more from learning practical skills, such as managing a household, preparing for work and developing interpersonal skills. While I agree that practical life skills deserve a greater place in schools, I do not believe they should replace academic subjects, which remain essential.

There are strong reasons for including more practical learning in schools. Many young people leave education without basic life skills, such as how to budget, cook nutritious meals, understand a contract or manage debt, and as a result, they struggle when they begin to live independently. Similarly, students often lack the skills needed to find and keep a job, including writing a CV, performing well in interviews and behaving professionally in the workplace. Interpersonal skills, such as communication, cooperation and conflict resolution, are also increasingly valued by employers, who frequently complain that graduates possess academic qualifications but lack these "soft skills". Teaching such skills at school would help all students, particularly those whose families are unable to teach them at home.

However, academic subjects remain indispensable. Mathematics, science, history and literature provide essential knowledge about the world and develop analytical, critical and creative thinking skills that are valuable in every area of life. They are also necessary for students who wish to pursue higher education and careers in fields such as medicine, engineering and research. Reducing academic study could therefore limit students' future opportunities and weaken a country's ability to compete in a knowledge-based economy.

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