IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big

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Đề bài

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big
city.

Do you agree or disagree?

Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

302 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. I partly agree with this statement, because the countryside has many benefits for children, but cities also offer important opportunities.

On the one hand, growing up in the countryside has many advantages. Firstly, the environment is cleaner and healthier. In the countryside, the air is fresh and there is less noise and traffic, while in big cities, the air is often polluted, which can cause breathing problems for children. Secondly, children in the countryside have more space to play outside. They can run in the fields, climb trees, swim in rivers and learn about nature. This helps them to be active and healthy. For example, when I was a child, I spent my summer holidays at my grandparents' house in the countryside, and I played outside all day with other children. Thirdly, the countryside is usually safer, and people know each other well, so children can play outside without their parents worrying.

On the other hand, cities also have many advantages for children. Firstly, there are usually better schools in cities, with good teachers and modern facilities. Secondly, cities have more opportunities for children to develop their talents, such as music schools, sports centres, libraries and museums. Thirdly, children in cities can meet people from many different backgrounds, which helps them to become more open-minded. In addition, hospitals and healthcare services are much better in cities.

In my opinion, both places have advantages. The countryside is better for young children's health and happiness, but cities offer better education and opportunities, which are important for older children.

In conclusion, I partly agree that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside, but cities also have many benefits for children's development.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

320 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often said that the countryside provides a better environment for children to grow up in than a big city. While I agree that rural life offers important benefits for children's health and well-being, I believe that cities provide educational and cultural opportunities that are equally valuable, so neither environment is clearly superior.

There are several reasons why the countryside can be an ideal place for children. Firstly, rural areas generally have cleaner air and less noise, traffic and overcrowding than cities, which is beneficial for children's physical health. Secondly, children in the countryside have more space and freedom to play outdoors, explore nature and take part in physical activities, which supports both their physical development and their creativity. My own childhood memories of summers spent at my grandparents' village, catching fish and running through rice fields, are among my happiest. Thirdly, rural communities tend to be close-knit and safer, so children can enjoy greater independence and a strong sense of belonging.

However, cities offer advantages that the countryside often cannot match. The most important is education. Urban schools usually have better facilities, more qualified teachers and a wider range of subjects, and children in cities can also attend extra classes, music lessons and sports clubs. Cities also provide access to cultural resources such as museums, libraries, theatres and exhibitions, which can broaden children's horizons. In addition, growing up in a diverse urban environment exposes children to people of different backgrounds and ideas, which may help them become more adaptable and open-minded. Healthcare is also generally more accessible in cities.

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