IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Children should never be educated at home by their parents.

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Đề bài

Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree
or disagree?

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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Đề hỏi lợi và hại của một hiện tượng, hoặc lợi có lớn hơn hại không (Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?). Với dạng "outweigh" bắt buộc nêu bên nào nặng hơn.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiKhẳng định lại đánh giá của bạn.
  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

303 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that parents should never educate their children at home. I disagree with this statement, because home education can be a good choice for some children, although it also has some disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides.

There are several advantages of being educated at home. Firstly, children can learn at their own speed. In a school class, there are many students, so the teacher cannot help every student. At home, parents can focus on their child and spend more time on difficult subjects. Secondly, children can study the things they are interested in, and their timetable is more flexible. For example, a child who is very good at music or sport can spend more time practising. Thirdly, home education can protect children from problems at school, such as bullying, peer pressure and bad influences.

However, home education also has some disadvantages. The biggest problem is that children may not have many chances to make friends and learn social skills. At school, children learn how to work in groups, communicate with others and solve problems with their classmates. At home, they may feel lonely and isolated. Secondly, many parents do not have enough knowledge to teach all subjects, especially difficult subjects like physics, chemistry and foreign languages. Thirdly, home education takes a lot of time, so one parent may have to stop working, which can cause financial problems for the family.

In my opinion, home education is not suitable for all children, but it can be a good choice for some, if the parents are well educated and make sure their children have opportunities to meet other children.

In conclusion, I disagree that children should never be educated at home. Home education has both advantages and disadvantages, and parents should decide what is best for their own child.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

320 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that children should never be educated at home by their parents. I disagree with such an absolute position, since home education can offer real benefits in certain circumstances, although it also involves significant drawbacks that families must consider carefully.

Home-schooled children can enjoy several advantages. The most important is personalised learning. Whereas a school teacher must manage a class of thirty or more pupils, parents can adapt lessons to their child's pace, learning style and interests, spending extra time on difficult areas and moving quickly through topics the child has already mastered. Home education also offers flexibility, which can be particularly valuable for children with special talents, such as young athletes or musicians who need time for training, or for those with health problems. In addition, it can protect children who have experienced serious bullying or who struggle in a large, noisy school environment.

On the other hand, there are considerable disadvantages. The most frequently mentioned is the risk of social isolation. School provides daily opportunities for children to make friends, work in teams and learn to deal with people from different backgrounds, and these social skills are essential in adult life. Home-schooled children may miss out on these experiences unless their parents make a special effort to involve them in group activities. Furthermore, few parents have the expertise to teach every subject to a high level, particularly at secondary level, and children may lack access to laboratories, sports facilities and specialist teachers. Home education also requires a huge commitment of time, often meaning that one parent must give up paid work.

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