IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today.

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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Many people believe that the violence shown on TV and in films influences young people's behaviour and increases violence in society. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain my opinion and suggest some ways to reduce violence in society.

On the one hand, I agree that violent TV programmes and films can affect young people. Children and teenagers often copy what they see on screen. If they watch many violent films, they may think that violence is normal or a good way to solve problems. For example, some children copy fighting scenes from action films and hurt their friends. In addition, watching a lot of violence can make young people less sensitive to other people's pain.

On the other hand, I do not think that TV and films are the main cause of violence in society. Millions of people watch action films, but most of them never become violent. There are other, more important causes of violence, such as poverty, unemployment, drugs, alcohol and problems in the family. For example, children who grow up in violent families are much more likely to become violent themselves.

There are several things that can be done to reduce violence in society. Firstly, parents should control what their children watch and talk to them about the difference between films and real life. Secondly, the government should have a rating system for films and TV programmes and should not allow violent programmes to be shown when children are watching. Thirdly, governments should try to reduce poverty and unemployment by creating jobs and improving education. Finally, schools should teach children how to solve problems peacefully.

In conclusion, I partly agree that violence on TV and in films can increase violence among young people, but other factors are more important. We need to solve these problems to reduce violence in society.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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Many people believe that the violence depicted on television and in films influences the behaviour of young people and contributes to rising levels of violence in society. While I accept that media violence can have some effect, I believe its role is often exaggerated, and that other social factors are far more important. This essay will explain my view and suggest ways of reducing violence.

There is some evidence that exposure to violent media can influence young people. Children and teenagers are particularly impressionable, and repeated exposure to violence may make it seem normal or even glamorous, especially when violent characters are portrayed as heroes who are rewarded for their actions. Some psychological studies have found that watching violent content can increase aggressive thoughts and behaviour in the short term, and it may also reduce sensitivity to the suffering of others.

However, I believe that media violence is only a minor factor. The vast majority of people who watch action films or violent dramas never commit violent acts. Moreover, in some countries where violent films are widely watched, violent crime has actually fallen over recent decades. Research suggests that the main causes of violence are social and economic: poverty, unemployment, inequality, drug and alcohol abuse, and, above all, exposure to violence within the family or community. Blaming television and films may distract attention from these deeper problems.

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