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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the

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Đề bài

When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the
customs of the new country.

Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices.

Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

318 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

When people move to a new country, some of them choose to follow the customs of that country, while others prefer to keep their own customs. Both choices have advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the best choice is to follow the new customs while still keeping some of your own traditions.

Following the customs of the new country has several advantages. Firstly, it helps people to fit into the new society. If they learn the language, eat local food and follow local manners, it will be easier for them to make friends and find a job. For example, many Vietnamese people who move to Australia learn English and join local activities, so they can communicate well with their neighbours and colleagues. Secondly, it shows respect for the people of the new country. However, if people only follow new customs, they may lose their own culture and identity. Their children may not be able to speak their native language or understand their family's traditions.

On the other hand, keeping your own customs also has advantages. It helps people to remember where they come from and feel proud of their culture. It also makes them feel less homesick, because they can celebrate traditional festivals and cook traditional food. For example, many Vietnamese families abroad still celebrate the Lunar New Year. However, if people only keep their own customs and do not try to adapt, they may feel isolated, and they may have problems communicating with local people. Local people may also think that they do not want to be part of the community.

In my opinion, people should try to follow the main customs of the new country, such as the language, laws and manners, but they should also keep their own traditions at home.

In conclusion, both choices have advantages and disadvantages, but I prefer a balance between adapting to the new culture and keeping one's own customs.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

309 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

When people emigrate to another country, they face a choice between adopting the customs of their new home and maintaining those of their country of origin. Each choice has its own advantages and drawbacks, but I believe the best approach is to combine the two.

Adopting the customs of the new country can make life considerably easier for immigrants. By learning the local language, understanding social etiquette and taking part in community life, they are more likely to build friendships, find employment and feel accepted. For instance, an immigrant who understands workplace norms, such as punctuality or the appropriate way to address colleagues, will usually find it easier to succeed professionally. Adapting to local customs is also a sign of respect towards the host society. However, the risk of completely abandoning one's own traditions is a loss of identity. Many second-generation immigrants, for example, can no longer speak their parents' language and feel disconnected from their heritage.

On the other hand, keeping one's own customs provides a sense of continuity and belonging in an unfamiliar environment. Celebrating traditional festivals, cooking familiar dishes and speaking one's native language can reduce homesickness and help families pass on their cultural heritage to their children. Immigrant communities that maintain their traditions also enrich the cultural diversity of their new countries, as can be seen in the popularity of foreign cuisines and festivals in many cities. Nevertheless, those who refuse to adapt at all may find themselves isolated, struggling to communicate and facing misunderstanding or even prejudice from local people.

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