IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Đề bài

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the
best teachers.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Đề hỏi bạn đồng ý đến mức nào (To what extent do you agree or disagree?). Bạn phải nêu quan điểm rõ ngay mở bài và giữ nhất quán đến kết bài.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

291 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many people believe that parents are the best teachers for their children. I partly agree with this statement, because parents teach children many important things, but teachers and other people are also very important in a child's education.

On the one hand, parents are the first teachers of their children. From the time a baby is born, parents teach them how to talk, walk, eat and behave. Parents also teach children important values, such as honesty, kindness and respect for other people. Because children spend a lot of time with their parents, they often copy their parents' behaviour. For example, if parents read books every day, their children will probably enjoy reading too. Moreover, parents know their children very well and love them, so they can understand what their children need and give them the right support.

On the other hand, parents are not always the best teachers. Firstly, many parents do not have enough knowledge to teach difficult subjects like mathematics, science or foreign languages. Teachers at school are trained to teach these subjects, so they can explain them better. Secondly, many parents are very busy with their jobs, so they do not have enough time to teach their children. Thirdly, children also need to learn from other people, such as teachers, friends and coaches, so that they can learn different ideas and skills. For example, at school, children learn how to work in a team and how to get along with people from different backgrounds.

In my opinion, parents are the best teachers of values and behaviour, but school teachers are better at teaching academic knowledge.

In conclusion, I partly agree that parents are the best teachers. Parents and teachers should work together to help children learn and grow.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

298 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often claimed that parents are the best teachers a child can have. While I agree that parents play an irreplaceable role in shaping their children's character and values, I do not believe they are the best teachers in every respect, since professional teachers and other influences also make essential contributions.

There are strong reasons to regard parents as children's most important teachers. Parents are a child's first educators, teaching them fundamental skills such as speaking, walking and taking care of themselves long before they start school. More importantly, they pass on values such as honesty, responsibility and respect, largely through their own example. Children naturally imitate the people closest to them, so a parent who reads regularly or treats others kindly is likely to raise a child who does the same. In addition, parents know their children better than anyone else, which allows them to understand their personalities, recognise their needs and provide emotional support.

However, there are limits to what parents can teach. Most parents lack the specialist knowledge needed to teach subjects such as advanced mathematics, chemistry or foreign languages, whereas trained teachers have both subject expertise and an understanding of how children learn. Furthermore, many parents work long hours and simply do not have the time to provide a structured education. Children also benefit from learning from a range of people: teachers, coaches and peers expose them to different perspectives and help them develop social skills, such as cooperating in a team and dealing with people from diverse backgrounds.

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