IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing.

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Đề bài

The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries
have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

298 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

The gap between rich and poor countries seems to be getting bigger. In this essay, I will suggest some ways to reduce this gap and explain whether I think rich countries have a duty to help poor countries in every way.

There are several ways to reduce the wealth gap. Firstly, education is very important. If people in poor countries have better education, they can get better jobs and help their country to develop. Rich countries can help by building schools, training teachers and giving scholarships to students from poor countries. Secondly, fair trade can help. Many poor countries sell raw materials such as coffee, rice and cotton at very low prices, while rich countries sell expensive products. If rich countries remove trade barriers and pay fair prices, poor countries can earn more money. Thirdly, poor countries need better infrastructure, such as roads, electricity and clean water, to attract investment and develop their economies. Finally, the governments of poor countries should fight corruption, so that money is used properly.

In my opinion, developed countries have a duty to help developing countries, but not in every way. Firstly, many rich countries became rich partly because they used resources from poor countries in the past, so they should help them now. Secondly, problems in poor countries, such as diseases, wars and climate change, can affect the whole world. However, rich countries should not control poor countries or make all their decisions. Developing countries must also take responsibility for their own development. Moreover, if rich countries give too much aid, poor countries may become dependent on it.

In conclusion, the wealth gap can be reduced through education, fair trade and better infrastructure. Developed countries have a duty to help, but developing countries must also work hard to improve their own situation.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

310 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

The economic gap between developed and developing nations appears to be widening. This essay will suggest several ways in which this gap could be reduced and argue that, while wealthy countries do have a responsibility to help, this should not mean assisting developing countries in every possible way.

Several measures could help to narrow the wealth gap. The most important is investment in education and healthcare, as a healthy and well-educated workforce is the foundation of economic development. Wealthy nations can contribute by funding schools and hospitals, training professionals and offering scholarships. Secondly, the international trading system should be made fairer. Many developing countries depend on exporting raw materials at low prices, while facing tariffs and subsidies in rich countries that make it difficult for them to compete, particularly in agriculture. Reducing these barriers would allow poorer nations to earn more from trade. Thirdly, developing countries need investment in infrastructure, such as roads, ports, electricity and internet access, to attract businesses and create jobs. Finally, good governance is essential, as corruption and political instability often prevent resources from reaching those who need them.

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