IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female.

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Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

To what extent do you agree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

295 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In many developed countries, more than half of the workers are women, but most high-level positions in companies are still held by men. Some people believe that companies should be required to give a certain percentage of these positions to women. I partly agree with this idea.

On the one hand, there are some good reasons for this policy. Firstly, it can help to reduce discrimination against women. Many women are as qualified and experienced as men, but they do not get promoted because of the old idea that men are better leaders. If companies have to give some top jobs to women, more talented women will have the chance to become leaders. Secondly, having more women in top positions can be good for companies. Women can bring different ideas and ways of thinking, which can help companies to make better decisions. Thirdly, female leaders can be role models for young girls and encourage them to have ambitious careers.

On the other hand, this policy also has some problems. Some people think that top jobs should be given to the best person, whether they are a man or a woman. If companies have to choose women because of a rule, some people may think that these women got their jobs because of their gender, not because of their ability. This could be unfair to both men and women.

In my opinion, a quota can be useful for a short time to help women get top positions, but companies should also solve the real problems, such as giving more support for working mothers and flexible working hours.

In conclusion, I partly agree that companies should give a certain percentage of high-level positions to women, but this should be combined with other measures to create equal opportunities.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

295 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Although women make up more than half of the workforce in many developed countries, senior positions in companies remain dominated by men. Some argue that companies should be required to reserve a certain proportion of these roles for women. I partly agree with this proposal, as quotas can be an effective short-term measure, but they are not a complete solution.

There are strong arguments in favour of quotas. The under-representation of women in leadership is not due to a lack of ability; women are now often better qualified than men at university level. Instead, it reflects barriers such as unconscious bias, male-dominated networks and the difficulty of combining careers with family responsibilities. Quotas can force companies to confront these barriers and accelerate progress that might otherwise take decades. Evidence from countries such as Norway, which introduced quotas for women on company boards, shows that they can rapidly increase female representation. Moreover, diverse leadership teams may make better decisions by bringing a wider range of perspectives, and female leaders can serve as role models for younger women.

On the other hand, critics argue that quotas conflict with the principle of appointing people on merit. Women appointed under a quota system may face the unfair perception that they were chosen because of their gender rather than their abilities, which could undermine their authority. In addition, quotas address the symptoms rather than the causes of inequality.

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