IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

304 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Today, we depend more and more on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, police work and even to fly planes. In this essay, I will discuss what computers may be used for in the future and whether this dependence is a good thing.

In the future, computers will probably be used in even more areas of our lives. Firstly, they may drive our cars. Self-driving cars are already being tested, and in the future, they may be common on the roads. Secondly, computers and robots may do many jobs in homes, such as cooking, cleaning and looking after old people. Thirdly, in medicine, computers may help doctors to find diseases earlier and even perform operations. Artificial intelligence may also be used to teach students, translate languages and help people make decisions.

In my opinion, depending on computers has many advantages. Computers can work faster and more accurately than humans, and they do not get tired. For example, computers in hospitals can analyse medical tests very quickly, which helps doctors to save lives. Computers also make our lives more convenient, because we can shop, study and work online.

However, we should also be careful about depending too much on computers. Firstly, computers can break down or be attacked by hackers. If a computer system in a bank or hospital stops working, it can cause serious problems. Secondly, personal information stored on computers can be stolen. Thirdly, if computers do everything for us, people may lose important skills, such as doing calculations or remembering information. In addition, many people may lose their jobs because of computers and robots.

In conclusion, computers will be used in many more areas in the future. Depending on computers is mostly a good thing, but we should be careful about the risks and make sure that humans stay in control.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

325 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Our dependence on computers has grown enormously, and they are now used in almost every field, from business and healthcare to crime detection and aviation. This essay will consider how computers are likely to be used in the future and discuss whether our growing reliance on them is beneficial or whether we should be more cautious.

In the future, computers, particularly those using artificial intelligence, are likely to take on even more complex tasks. Self-driving vehicles may become common on our roads, potentially reducing accidents caused by human error. In medicine, AI systems may diagnose diseases from scans and test results with greater accuracy than doctors and assist in performing precise surgical operations. Homes may become increasingly automated, with robots helping to care for elderly people. Computers may also play a larger role in education, personalising learning for each student, and in government, helping to plan cities and manage resources.

This dependence brings significant benefits. Computers can process vast amounts of data quickly and accurately, work continuously without fatigue and perform dangerous or repetitive tasks, freeing humans for more creative and meaningful work. In fields such as medicine and scientific research, they can save lives and accelerate discoveries.

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