IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects.

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In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects. Discuss the effects of this trend.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In many countries, schools are reducing sports and exercise classes and replacing them with academic subjects such as mathematics, science and languages. This trend has some positive effects, but I believe that its negative effects are more serious.

On the one hand, there are some positive effects. Firstly, students have more time to study academic subjects, which are important for their exams. As a result, they may get better grades and have a better chance of getting into a good university. Secondly, schools can show better exam results, which can improve their reputation. Thirdly, academic knowledge is useful for many careers, so students may be better prepared for their future jobs.

On the other hand, this trend has several negative effects. Firstly, it is bad for students' physical health. Many young people today already spend a lot of time sitting in front of computers and smartphones. If they do not have PE lessons at school, they may not do any exercise at all. This can lead to obesity, heart disease and other health problems. Secondly, it can harm students' mental health. Exercise helps students to relax and reduce stress. Without sport, students who study all day may feel more stressed and tired. Thirdly, sports teach students important skills, such as teamwork, leadership, discipline and how to deal with winning and losing. Students will miss these chances to develop. In addition, without exercise, students may find it harder to concentrate in class, so their academic results may not improve as much as expected.

In my opinion, schools should keep sports and exercise classes, because healthy students are happier and can study better.

In conclusion, replacing sports classes with academic subjects may help students to get better grades, but it can also harm their physical and mental health and their personal development.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

304 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In many countries, schools under pressure to improve examination results are reducing or eliminating sports and physical education classes in favour of academic subjects. While this trend may bring some short-term academic benefits, I believe its overall effects on students' health and development are largely negative.

The main intended benefit of this change is improved academic performance. Additional lessons in subjects such as mathematics, science and languages can help students to cover the syllabus more thoroughly and prepare for high-stakes examinations, which determine access to universities and future careers. Schools may also benefit, as better exam results can enhance their reputation and attract more students and funding.

However, the negative consequences are considerable. The most obvious concerns physical health. Many young people already lead sedentary lifestyles, spending long hours studying and using digital devices, and for some, school sport is their only regular form of exercise. Reducing physical activity is likely to contribute to the rising rates of childhood obesity, along with associated health problems such as diabetes and heart disease, which may continue into adulthood. Secondly, the change may harm students' mental well-being. Physical activity is an effective way of reducing stress and anxiety, and removing it at a time of increased academic pressure could worsen these problems. Thirdly, sport develops important personal qualities, including teamwork, leadership, resilience and self-discipline, which are valued by employers and are essential in everyday life.

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