IELTS Writing Task 2 · Problem & Solution

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developing nations.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developing nations.
Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

292 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

The world's population is increasing quickly, and this causes problems not only for poor countries but also for developed and developing countries. In this essay, I will describe some problems caused by overpopulation and suggest some possible solutions.

Overpopulation causes many problems. Firstly, it puts pressure on natural resources. When there are more people, more food, water and energy are needed. In some countries, there is not enough clean water or food for everyone, which leads to hunger and disease. Secondly, overpopulation causes environmental problems. More people means more cars, factories and rubbish, which cause air and water pollution. Forests are also cut down to make space for houses and farms, so many animals lose their homes. Thirdly, in big cities, overpopulation causes problems such as traffic jams, crowded public transport, high housing prices and a lack of schools and hospitals. For example, in cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh City, the population is growing very fast, and there are traffic jams every day. Finally, when there are too many people, there may not be enough jobs, so unemployment and poverty increase.

There are several possible solutions to this problem. The most important one is education, especially for girls and women. When women are educated, they usually get married later and have fewer children, because they want to have a career. Secondly, the government should provide family planning services, so that people can decide how many children to have. Thirdly, governments should develop rural areas by building schools, hospitals and factories, so that people do not need to move to big cities.

In conclusion, overpopulation causes many problems, such as a lack of resources, pollution and overcrowded cities. Education, family planning and developing rural areas can help to solve these problems.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

302 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

The world's population has grown dramatically over the past century, and this growth is creating problems not only for poorer countries but also for industrialised and developing nations. This essay will describe some of the main problems caused by overpopulation and suggest possible solutions.

One of the most serious consequences of overpopulation is pressure on natural resources. As the population grows, the demand for food, fresh water and energy increases, and in many regions, these resources are already scarce. Water shortages, food insecurity and rising energy prices can lead to malnutrition, conflict and economic instability. A second major problem is environmental damage. Growing populations require more land for housing and agriculture, which leads to deforestation and the loss of wildlife habitats. Increased industrial activity, transport and consumption also produce more pollution and greenhouse gas emissions, contributing to climate change.

Overpopulation also creates urban problems. As people migrate to cities in search of work, urban areas become overcrowded, leading to traffic congestion, housing shortages, the growth of slums and pressure on public services such as schools, hospitals and sanitation. Cities such as Lagos and Mumbai face severe challenges of this kind. In addition, when population growth outpaces economic growth, there may not be enough jobs, resulting in unemployment, poverty and social unrest.

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